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Friday, September 9, 2016

Growth - A Haiku

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Soothing air, pretty clouds
And dancing lily in the pot
A growth Imprisoned!

Utpal Kant Mishra
Mumbai
Sep.9, 2016  

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18 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 9, 2016 at 6:28 PM

    Beautiful Classic Haiku :)

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  2. Reading PleasureSeptember 9, 2016 at 6:41 PM

    Ah, this is beautifully written.

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  3. UtpalSeptember 9, 2016 at 7:49 PM

    Thanks Shweta for your read.

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  4. UtpalSeptember 9, 2016 at 7:50 PM

    @Reading Pleasure! Thanks you so much for such beautiful words

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  5. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 9, 2016 at 9:01 PM

    Imprisoned...how harsh!

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  6. UtpalSeptember 9, 2016 at 9:06 PM

    Yes but sadly it is the reality.

    Nature has created them for ground and we have brought them in pots.

    "I"ness always overshadows "One"ness

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  7. J CSeptember 9, 2016 at 11:27 PM

    Oh yes, potted prison. Put it in the ground and let it dance free. Love your haiku.

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  8. gmaSeptember 10, 2016 at 12:29 AM

    I enjoy potted plants and have never considered
    that they may be prisoners. But I think you are right!

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  9. MaritSeptember 10, 2016 at 1:33 PM

    "Dancing lillies".. it doesn't get much better. Lovely poem! Hug from Holland!

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  10. carol l mckSeptember 10, 2016 at 8:54 PM

    Hmm ~ well penned ~ not sure I agree about the 'imprisoned' ~ do get your meaning

    Happy Creating ~ ^_^

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  11. UtpalSeptember 10, 2016 at 9:41 PM

    @J C, Thanks for your read and being absorbed with the meaning. I am humbled.

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  12. UtpalSeptember 10, 2016 at 9:44 PM

    @gma, Actually I conceived this looking after my plotted plants. I assumed what they would have said to me had they have been able to speak our language. And than I assumed what they are saying to me in their language :)

    Thanks for your read and motivation.

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  13. UtpalSeptember 10, 2016 at 9:46 PM

    @Marit, I am humbled.

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  14. UtpalSeptember 10, 2016 at 9:47 PM

    @Carol, Thanks for your read and such valuable comment.

    Just another take, I feel I am imprisoned in my body with the laws of society and lands :)

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  15. rebeccaSeptember 14, 2016 at 1:12 AM

    purest beauty.
    thank you for the inspiration, so glad you are here sharing your haiku!

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  16. UtpalSeptember 14, 2016 at 3:41 PM

    Rebecca, It feels highly motivating with such good words.

    Thanks for appreciation.

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  17. Ramesh SoodSeptember 15, 2016 at 11:10 AM

    A growth imprisoned..ah, I was perhaps among such people.. for years stayed stuck happy with such growth..

    RS

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  18. UtpalSeptember 15, 2016 at 5:59 PM

    Ah Ramesh, I could understand. In fact most of us do remain more with external world than internal.
    Thanks for your read.

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